Senin, 22 Juni 2009

WRITING PRODUCT IV-OPINION

Traditional Language
           Traditional languages are the one of the culture that every country has. For example Indonesia, it has many traditional languages. Traditional language are the impotrtant thing that can be identity of the country. But recently, Kompas media said about traditional language that has gone in this era slowly.
           First reason is the modernization and globalization era. I agree with that because I think modernization and globalization can make bad effect to the citizens. The information can perform faster and foreign culture can come into our country but when the citizens can receive information faster than before automatically their own culture can be lost by it. Lately, they feel ashamed with their own traditional culture.
           Second reason is the educational institutions not teach their students about their own culture. I agree with that. In fact many of educational institutions teach their students with International language and the educator just tell about foreign culture. Especially for kindergarten and elementary students. Kids in that age can memorize more and more what their teacher teach for them. It can make the students never known their own traditional culture.
          So, I think we as the young generation must maintain this cause. To remain our culture so that it would not become lost. 

7 komentar:

  1. By :120810494G

    - I think your paragraph is ok.

    - Your paragraph is focus.

    - About your grammar, I find little mistake like this "It can make the students...", you have to change like "It can makes the students...." etc

    Give me comment in my blog please!

    BalasHapus
  2. I think your paragraph is good enough..

    But you can edit

    the impotrtant thing with
    the important thing

    don't forget to comment my blog yach

    BalasHapus
  3. hi ranti, i like your topic.

    your grammar and your writing are good.

    BalasHapus
  4. hy Ranti. . .


    i think your paragraph is good enough. . .

    and easy to understand. . .

    Ranti, give me comment too. .

    Rico 120810490 G

    BalasHapus
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    BalasHapus
  6. i like your writing theme
    traditional languages are now getting faded. so sad..

    so far your writing is good.
    but i found the same-wrong grammar like as i criticized you in the previous writing ( about stewardess test if i'm not mistaken ) in this sentence:
    Traditional language are the important thing.
    if it's plural, so you have to put an 's' or 'es' at the end of 'language' :)

    keep in good writing!

    DAMASTI AMANDARA 120810185G

    BalasHapus
  7. hi ranti ..

    i agree with your reason ..
    your paragraph is very interesting for me ..

    but i found some mistake in your paragraph ..

    that's all ..

    120810489G

    BalasHapus